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But I come from a race of people who answer snide back that's my point.
I'd rather he said it was shit and had done with it, shit I understand.

didn't find this funny, although it read well

Thanks, it's not exactly a side splitter more of a smirk at best

Quote: Teddy Paddalack @ May 15 2013, 2:16 PM BST

My point was that I was arguing that its contrived.

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Quote: Ben @ May 12 2013, 7:17 PM BST

There's nothing wrong with setting things up. In fact, that's the very essence of comedy, but lines like the following are too forced and unnatural:

Salesman
"If you don't mind me saying so you look remarkably young to have been in the war"

I don't see why the salesman would say that after two vague mentions of the war.

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I explained here why I felt it was contrived in a negative sense. You made no attempt to counter this, so I don't see how you can carry on whining.

This is a miss for me too I'm afraid.

It seems weak almost to the point where I feel I've missed something.

I liked it.