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Laughed my arse off...the whole thing was just brilliant!

p.s while I'm 'ere, cheers for the advice t'other day

Sent the link to this to some friends as I just knew they would love it. They did.
Fast becoming my fav writer on here Perry.
More please.
Do you write with an erection sometimes? I just have this image in my head & I like it...A LOT

What part of your head?

The Corrrrrrrr tex Ray!

Never heard a mouth called that

Look I fancy the guy. I have a thing for men with shaved heads. I think he is Phwoargeous. Do not tell Dave though. The upset will kill him ok.

Was it a good idea? Yes.
Was it well executed? Yes.
Was it funny? Yes.
Was it way too long? Yes.
Am I appreciative of Perry's posts? Hell, yes!

It's come up before on here, but the genuine advice of people who are doing what it takes to get somewhere and can be bothered to take time to share that experience with others - well, I think you are the most useful posters on the critique forum, frankly. Thanks.

Ooh, Mr. Bussell, I missed that avatar.

Quote: Charley @ February 9, 2008, 10:04 PM

Do you write with an erection sometimes? I just have this image in my head & I like it...A LOT

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It's rarely soft, to be honest Charley. My erection is my comedy inspiration. Well, it makes people laugh anyroad...

Quote: Badge @ February 10, 2008, 1:15 AM

Was it a good idea? Yes.
Was it well executed? Yes.
Was it funny? Yes.
Was it way too long? Yes.
Am I appreciative of Perry's posts? Hell, yes!

It's come up before on here, but the genuine advice of people who are doing what it takes to get somewhere and can be bothered to take time to share that experience with others - well, I think you are the most useful posters on the critique forum, frankly. Thanks.

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Cheers Badge.

F**king Hilarious.

Love the inspired use of Geordie accents, like Sid the sexist in an episode of Byker Grove, comedy gold.

Howay

I've only just got round to viewing this for some reason...

I really liked it and it made me laugh.

I think if it was in a TV show it would be better split into sections. A whole 5 minutes worth is a bit too much to keep the attention.

I was impressed by the geordie accent. Are you a geordie? Anyway, do it again.... in colour.

Quote: Charley @ February 9, 2008, 10:20 PM

Look I fancy the guy. I have a thing for men with shaved heads. I think he is Phwoargeous. Do not tell Dave though. The upset will kill him ok.

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I'm growing my hair as quick as I can.