COMMUNITY BOBBY is a family sitcom and is based around an idea I had when a rather large P.C.S.O passed me on the street. I have took serious time and effort in planning out the scene by scene aswell as the Character Profile each episode guide and much more. And now all that's left is get the show written.
Meet Robert Hatcher, a fat, unwashed, unshaved and unhappy man. Working at Swanson Supermarket, as a trolley collector, for the past 20 years Bobby soon finds himself growing weary of life. However when a robbery takes place in the Supermarket and a dramatic trolley dash Bobby saves the day both heroically and accidentally... Things are finally beginning to look good for Bobby when he finds himself an internet sensation and a surprising job offer from an old family friend could see Bobby's life changed forever...
So far here's what I have wrote. Any opinions would be much appreciated
SCENE ONE:
EXT: SKY BLUE POLICE STATION.
We OPEN on a large, ancient looking building. A sign on the door reads: 'SKY BLUE POLICE STATION' The camera slowly PANS INTO the building through the large double doors at the entrance.
SCENE TWO:
INT: SKY BLUE POLICE STATION.
We PASS THROUGH a long, narrow corridor up to the Reception Desk. The phone is ringing. We CONTINUE past the Reception Desk and pass a few officers standing by a coffee machine, laughing.
The camera CONTINUES past the Interrogation rooms. The first door bursts open and a male and female police officer exit the room.
The camera FADES THROUGH a closed door with a sign based reading: "Police Community Support Officers" The room is small. Desks are based all around the office. The camera PASSES 4 desks until finally the camera STOPS and turns its attention to a large, desk. A phone is based beside a computer and a stack of paper. A few pens are scattered around the desk. The name bar on the desk reads: "ROBERT HATCHER"
The phone begins to ring- 3 MONTHS EARLIER
SCENE THREE:
EXT: SWANSON SUPERMARKET CAR PARK.
The car park is large. A mixed range of vehicles surround a large building. "WELCOME TO SWANSON SUPERMARKET" reads the sign atop the building.
Struggling up the car park pushing 8 trolleys in total is ROBERT "BOBBY" HATCHER. He stops, removes a handkerchief from his back pocket and dries the sweat from his brow.
BOBBY groans loudly and leans against the queue of trolley's thus blocking oncoming cars.
A car horn beeps loudly.
BOBBY reacts to the sound and turns to come face to face with an elderly woman smiling a toothless grin towards him.
BOBBY
Sorry love. I'll get out of your way now.
AGNES
Thank you dear.
BOBBY makes his way back over to the trolleys and pushes them to their desired location.
BOBBY smiles again and turns his attention back to the old woman.
BOBBY
There you go miss.
AGNES
Thank you dear. (UNDER BREATH) Blimp!
BOBBY looks shocked as the Old woman speeds away.
BOBBY
(SHOUTS) I happen to have lost allot of weight!
From behind another trolley collector: COLIN CROSS laughs.
COLIN
Turn around I think you'll find it!
BOBBY turns to COLIN and sticks up his middle finger. COLIN continues to laugh.
CUT TO.
SCENE FOUR:
SWANSON SUPERMARKET: THE STAFF ROOM
The room is small and cramped. There are only six seats based in the back of the room. A crowd of people (all wearing the same uniform) are gathered and are waiting impatiently for the arrival of someone or something. In the midst of the crowd are BOBBY and COLIN.
BOBBY
(TO COLIN)
Hey. Did I tell you about my new neighbour?
COLIN
(SHAKES HEAD)
No. What?
BOBBY
This Indian bloke moved in a week ago. He's a right mouthy git, travelled the world, swam with sharks and wrestled bear... Apparently.
COLIN
Whoa! What a guy. Sounds like he's had quite a life!
BOBBY
That's exactly what I said to him. I asked him his name. And do you know what he's called?
COLIN
No. What?
BOBBY
Bindair Dundat.
BOBBY laughs.
COLIN looks confused.
BOBBY (CONT.)
It was a joke you Clown. Don't you get it?
COLIN still looks confused.
BOBBY (CONT.)
Bloody hell Col. It doesn't matter. I don't want you hurting yourself by thinking too hard.
COLIN
(MUMBLES TO SELF)
Bindair Dundat?
(SHAKES HEAD)
From the front of the room TERRENCE HOLT enters followed by LIZ WIX. TERRENCE clears his throat loudly. The chatter stops. The room falls silent.
LIZ
Ok everybody. Listen up. Your boss: Mr Holt has an announcement to make.
LIZ steps backwards and smiles a wide toothy grin at TERRENCE.
COLIN
(MUMBLES TO SELF)
Bindair Dundat?
TERRENCE steps forward.
TERRENCE
Ladies and Gentlemen. I have called this meeting today because I am afraid I have some rather upsetting news. I'm very sorry to say that earlier today I received a phone call from Joan Cross, the wife to our local supermarket hero, the man who kept us safe from the thieves and common criminals of this world, Security Guard Mark Cross... Who, sadly, in the early hours of this morning died. I'm very sorry to say the cancer finally beat him.
Many of the members of the crowd gasp in shock.
COLIN suddenly bursts into laughter.
COLIN
(LAUGHING)
That is so funny!
(TO BOBBY)
I get it now! I get it!
(PAUSE)
BOBBY and everyone else in the room, including LIZ & TERRENCE, stare at COLIN in shock.
COLIN (CONT.)
(SHRUGS)
What?
CUT TO.
More to come ... perhaps if you all enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.