Gentle ribbing?
My 2 cocks episode 2 Page 2
Where is your confusion?
None, its just I didn't spot any.
Well then, what are you talking about when you mention that I may have a problem with you?
You bang on endlessly about my dyspraxia when I haven't brought it up in ages. You give endless ernest and patronising feedback on something, I've clearly said that I wrote for a laugh (whilst ignoring pretty much else anything I write). I could go on, but hey why don't you take it from there.
I always try to direct my feedback, criticism and advice at anyone that may be reading the thread. Otherwise what's the point in giving feedback publicly, so I apologize if I come across as patronizing it's not really my intention. I just want the information to be accessible to everyone.
You clearly didn't write it clearly otherwise it would have been clearer.
When you whined and bitched about not receiving any feedback on your latest submissions to critique, about 5 people including myself rushed to offer you some. No, I don't follow your work too closely but I follow it more than most. I've read a lot of your stuff, supported you as a fellow member and probably collaborated with you too several times.
Please, do go on. I have nothing better to do. 
Quote: Lee @ January 14 2013, 4:20 PM GMTPlease, do go on. I have nothing better to do.
Well there is much to say to that?
I do have other things to do.
Plus you have to do it double, so I imagine it takes up twice as much time 
What's the best condom to use If you want to Maximise her pleasure
But not too much that she gets carried away.
Quote: sootyj @ January 14 2013, 3:57 PM GMTGentle ribbing?
Ah yes of course
Cheers SootyJ
Steve whats the title of the new national qualification in impersonating Churchill the insurance dog\?
[quote name="Steve Sunshine" post="948365" date="January 14 2013, 5:13 PM GMT"
Ah yes course
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Is that post graduate?
Quote: Lee @ December 16 2012, 11:06 PM GMTBut you're being held back by messy dialogue. It has nothing to do with your dyspraxia or your spelling or your formatting. You are missing a rhythm, a tone, a beat a naturalistic voice. And without those qualities, whatever you write, however funny gets lost in a sea of unpretty dialogue.
This is a fair point from Lee and one that I've raised in the past. I don't know what to suggest really on how to improve as it's almost become your style. How you unlearn that after so many years and start again is probably hard work. Saying that, I've never seen anything you've submitted anywhere, so maybe you polish it all up and the dialogue on here is a quick, rough draft. I don't know and refuse to rummage through your bins to confirm.
Interesting I've never been one to hide my light under a bushel
Critique and showcase are full of my little projects I take an inordinate amount of pride in
I do wonder why some focus on my whimsythat's quite rare