Hi, sorry to be pestering for feedback but I'd really like to hear what anyone thinks. I had a go at writing previously and posted it on the critique forum and was delighted to receive some comments.
This is an idea I had rattling in my head for a while and decided to have a bash at writing a couple of pages at the weekend.
Hindlee - The Life of a Media Slag
Episode One
Interviewer - young-ish, formal and professional looking. Very much a BBC newsreader type
Interviewer:
Celebs, from the great and good through the B, C and D-listers all the way to the self-promoting social parasites that litter the popular press and take up valuable oxygen. This generation, more than any other have embraced celebrity worship and allowed it to be taken to a whole new level. Newspapers and magazines feature glaring headlines of the lives of people who are famous for the sake of being famous, Jordan, Jodie Marsh, Katie Price and that one from the Iceland adverts. But by far the worst of these horrendous slags has to be Hindlee.
(Turns to reveal Hindlee, is sat right next to them - Hindlee probably doesn't need to be described if you know the type. A young woman who any attractiveness she possessed has been extended, enhanced and exhibited, the rest is spray tanned orange)
Interviewer:
Hello Hindlee.
Hindlee:
Hello
Interviewer:
Firstly, I think we should clear up the issue of your name
Hindlee:
That's right. Now my real name is Jemma Royd. But like my showbiz name is Hindlee. I like to think that Emma Royd is the more hidden part of me, tucked away but always there. I like to keep it more private from public view
Interviewer:
Does this sometimes cause you difficulties?
Hindlee:
Sometimes a bit of a pain in the arse
Interviewer:
And where did the name Hindlee come from?
Hindlee:
I wanted to be sort of like those models from the 1960's, like Twiggy and that. And there's this one always photographed in black and white, looking all serious, so I took her name, Myra Hindley, but I thought I'd just use the last name, more sexy and mysterious. And I made it more fun with the two ee's
Interviewer:
Incredible. Now, you first came to prominence when you were still in your early teens, is that right?
Hindlee:
That's right. I was in teen girl group, JL B8
Interviewer:
JL B8? And where did the name of the group come from?
Hindlee:
I dunno. There was 8 of us. Like S Club 7
Interviewer:
What about the JL B part? Did that stand for anything? Like ELO or OMD
Hindlee:
I know like, hello?!! OMG!
Interviewer:
You don't perhaps think it may have been to promote you to a potentially pederast audience, the traditional "dirty old man market". J L B8, Jail Bait?
Hindlee:
No, it was just 8 young girls, having fun, dancing, wearing make-up and little dresses and going clubbing with music execs
Interviewer:
You don't think that sometimes the lyrics sometimes were a trifle risqué for such a young group? For example, from your song "Young and Fun" we have the lyrics, "Take me tonight"
Hindlee:
Yeah, like take me to a party tonight
Interviewer:
"It'll be so tight"
Hindlee:
Tights' an expression like good
Interviewer:
"Although I'm young, it'll be such fun. Do me, do me, do me tonight."?
Hindlee:
I don't get what you're trying to say
Interviewer:
The career of JL B8 was obviously cut short from its limited shelf life by the public scandal of two of your band mates, Heidi and Chantal actually having been in their early thirties.
Hindlee:
I know. I was totes amazed by that. After that, no-one really wanted to buy our music. I've tried to get the old group back together for like a reunion concert but Heidi and Chantal just want to spend time with their grandkids now so they're not interested.
Interviewer:
Your manager from your time in the group, Brian Frankstein wasn't able to take part in this programme was he?
Hindlee:
No, unfortunately he's busy helping police with their enquiries about Operation Yewtree or something
Interviewer:
Do you have any comments to make regarding the allegations?
Hindlee:
I do as it happens! She's a lying cow! It was supposed to have been when I was 15 and he was seeing me at the time and he swore he never cheated! And she's a minger anyway
Interviewer:
Following your fame as part of a group you then went on to attempt a solo career
Hindlee:
Yeah. I felt like I could offer more musically by being individually on my own. So I released my first solo album "Hindlee". It took me ages to think of a title.
Interviewer:
Your debut single went it to the top 40, where it peaked at number 40
Hindlee:
Little known fact, but my album is actually the only album in history that no-one has ever tried to download illegally
Interviewer:
The NME review upon its release was simply "My ears are bleeding"
Hindlee:
That's happened to me before when you stick a cotton bud in too far, it's nasty. But what I don't get is why the person wrote about their medical problems and not a review of my album. Course, he might just have just sent the wrong thing in to the magazine. I did that before, for my GCSE English coursework I accidentally handed in a More Magazine. I got a B!
At this point Hindlee's mother walks in. She is the living embodiment of the Essex girl jokes of the '80's (except no longer quite so girlish); she readjusts her boobs to a perkier position
Sharonda:
Oooh, I didn't know you was in here filming?
Hindlee:
You've been getting ready all morning
Sharonda:
No I haven't. I was doing my Pilates. (To the interviewer) I'm very flexible you know. If I'd have known you was down here I'd have made a bit of an effort. These are just my work-out clothes. Anyway, I'm Hindlee's mummy, Sharonda. People reckon we look like sisters though, don't they? I was a very young mum of course. I could have been famous myself you know, but my little girl's doing all that for me now, ain't ya babe?
Interviewer:
So you're living vicariously?
Sharonda:
Ooh, no! I don't like heights
Interviewer:
So, tell me Mrs. Royd...
Sharonda:
It's not Mrs., it's Miss (placing hand on Interviewer's knee) and you can call me Sharonda. You can call me anytime (winks)
Interviewer:
What exactly happened to thwart your own ambitions to make you desperately pin your hopes on your daughter?
Sharonda:
Well, many things really. I was very nearly in Basic Instinct. Then that bitch Sharon Stone got the part and the rest is history. That part had been written for me you know
Sharonda crosses and uncrosses her legs, fortunately we can't see anything but it looks as though the interviewer is not so lucky
Hindlee:
Shut up mum. They haven't come to talk to you. This is all about my career as a singer/glamour model/ actress/ writer / entrepreneur.
Interviewer:
And what is it you have been doing most recently?
Hindlee:
Well, I'm currently just releasing a fragrance
Interviewer:
Oh, dear. Should I open a window?
Hindlee:
I'm calling it L'Estuaree. For the woman what knows what she wants, and what she wants is to buy my perfume and smell like me.