Lazzard
Wednesday 9th January 2013 9:29am [Edited]
Ludlow
8,959 posts
Quote: paul brown @ January 9 2013, 7:24 AM GMT
I have also completed another script which I am immensely proud of (cant believe I forgot about it am so ashamed right now!) it is called: SILENCE IS DEADLY and it is about a Stand Up Comedian who is funny on stage but off stage he is not funny in the slightest and is forever putting his foot in it and finding himself in surprisingly awkward situations. All the situations that occur in the show have happened to either myself or someone I know so it is based on my knowledge (which I've heard is the best thing to write about - something that you know allot about) and also I am a Stand Up Comedian and the stand up routine used in the episode is actually the routine I used in my debut act
So far I have not built up the confidence to send it off. But if anyone on here would like to give it a read and express their opinions I will very happily PM you
The general form vis a vis getting stuff read is to post a few (5 max) pages in Critique.
If you get any takers, that's the point to ask for a full read.
it's a lot to ask and people need to know they're not about to get a load of tripe.
Good luck.
Edit: just spotted you have something in Critique now.
Sorry.