A BEAUTFUL RAYMOND BRIGGS ANIMATED SNOW SCENE
GRAMS
Walking in the air
WE SEE A KID IN A DRESSING GOWN SITTING IN THE SNOW ROCKING BACK AND FORTH CRYING
POV MOVES TO A GROUP OF SNOW MEN WITH SNOW DOGS STANDING AROUND A CAR MADE OUT OF SNOW
POV MOVES IN WE CAN SEE THE SNOW MAN SHAGGING A SNOW WOMAN IN THE CAR WHILST THE OTHER SNOW MEN WATCH
TITLES ROLL UP THE SCREEN
"Sootyj productions presents the Snowman and the Snow dogging."
It's a pretty weak joke, soot.
Whose POV are we witnessing?
Viewers obviously
weak it maybe but it's all your getting
If you aren't getting "wanking in the air" into the rewrite then I refuse to read it. Preferably including a reference to whether or not Aled Jones was involved.
Quote: sootyj @ December 16 2012, 8:54 PM GMTViewers obviously
weak it maybe but it's all your getting
...until pt2
That will be my unfinished symphony I suspect
C'mon soots! You don't post in here much any more do you? Get your redrafting on and knock out a good sketch! 
What would Cojumbo do?
Men I had a magnum opus of a skit that nobody read
So I'll stick to whoring my talents
Quote: Nil Putters @ December 16 2012, 9:07 PM GMTWhat would Cojumbo do?
He's dead
Hung himself with his own trunk
SootyJ
You'd better post some sketches over Christmas.
Let's have some fun.
If I don't see pt 2 then you may have just killed Critique again.
Do you want that kind of snow on your hands?
I thought not.
HK and whats wrong g with you broke your funny bone sunshine?
I don't understand that sentence in it's entirety, but I'm up for posting a sketch or two over the festive period.
Who else is with us?
Leevil?
We haven't seen any of your magic in a while.
Putters who's smelling who's justice this Christmas?
Badge?
Ben?
Anyone else?
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ December 16 2012, 10:10 PM GMTI don't understand that sentence in it's entirety
I'm in! When exactly?