My first short stand up (be gentle)

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I found it hard to read, but keep at it

It's actually only about 4 mins, even with the pauses...
Prob harder to read because I wrote the pauses and other performance notes into it, sorry yas didn't like it, ah well, it's only a first draft :/

I actually liked that "the toilets are very clean, aren't they?" line. I say 'actually', because I don't have anything very nice to say about the rest tbh :/

At least there was one line that worked in text... I threaded this inbetween songs the other night, and it actually worked... The odd giggle is all I look for between songs... Every little counts hey :/

I liked "the toilets are very clean aren't they?" and weaslyist was funny (thing about your dad and the hangover felt a bit dragged out and generic)

Keep it up