My sitcom idea

Hello world I'm vidmaster

I have just had an idea for my own sitcom; I have not got a title yet but the sitcom combines flatshare with the workplace. the Sitcom is set in Edison's electrical a struggling electrical and lighting retailers on the outskirts of london; the main focus of the story is the stores top employees flatmates Adam Sutler and Oliver "rings" Mcquire and their observations of the frequent and often surreal mishaps that befall the store and their coworkers.

Please let me know your thoughts and do leave feedback

thank you.

Put up a bit of it an we'll critique it for you. At the moment you have only given us a synopsis.

Otterfox is right, very hard to tell from the above, a small scene would be better.

This isn't a sitcom idea so far; it's a setting and some character names.

I like Oliver but I'm not sure about Adam.

I have an idea for a joke. It's about a dog. What do you reckon?

I'd definitely switch the setting to an abattoir.

how does my dog smell, with its nose