Quote: Pingl @ October 19 2012, 11:32 AM BSTDifficult, I think I prefer mine to be honest, but hey I'm always open to suggestions
Absolutely fine. I just did it for fun, I wouldn't be so rude or big-headed as to edit your work and expect you to bow down in agreement. 
Anyway, it's a nice sketch. You may have to make reference to why they;re auditioning for the part of corpse, but perhaps the sketch would be swift enough so that nobody really noticed that oddity.