Hi guys - I filmed a comedy sketch recently and was after some feedback.
and sorry for the shameless self-promotion, just wanted the opinions of those in the know
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z561zzApn5g
Thanks guys - and feel free to share if you like it
Most YouTube comedy sketches leave something to be desired, and that 'something' is usually comedy.
This sketch, however, is actually quite good.
The cast might well have a future in comedy.
Well shot, nicely edited, and featuring a couple of really funny performances. The script could maybe have been tighter and the ending punchier but this is definitely a step in the right direction. Well done, guys!
Excellent. Some good lines and nicely acted.
I think most men would want to bake a cake as well.
I might be tempted to take the scissors to the middle a little bit - the pace drops a tad.
BUT brilliantly shot and performed and a really nice premis with some great lines.
Are you getting much traction over there with your stuff?
You certainly deserve it.
I liked it a lot Mike. Agree with other posters that it could be a little tighter. But definitely made me want to see some more. Professionally delivered, well done. 
Quote: Lazzard @ August 26 2012, 3:40 PM BSTI might be tempted to take the scissors to the middle a little bit - the pace drops a tad.
BUT brilliantly shot and performed and a really nice premis with some great lines.Are you getting much traction over there with your stuff?
You certainly deserve it.
No, not much traction at this stage. Really need something with viral potential for it to gain any.
Appreciate all the comments, keep them coming. Thanks guys
Hey, don't let Noel Fielding see that. He'd be dead jealous of that bloke in the dress. 