Hello,
I've just finished a new animation, please take a look and lemme know what you think! Big thank you to Yacob Wingnut for doing a great job with the voices.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eEzkkW-ETpw
I hope you enjoy!
ShoePie's Scooby Snacks
Any comments at all would be appreciated.
Hi
I usually like your stuff and the animation is pretty neat.
But the jokes felt a bit tired and it didn't really hold together.
Besides you're mocking Scooby sandwiches and snacks, the 1970s called.
They don't want their jokes back.
Sorry couldn't be more positive.
Quote: sootyj @ August 21 2012, 4:23 PM BSTBesides you're mocking Scooby sandwiches and snacks, the 1970s called.
They don't want their jokes back.
Sorry couldn't be more positive.
lol, that's OK. Cheers for giving it a go.
Sorry I am as you know generally a fan.
Yeah, it fell a bit flat for me too Shoey, sorry.
And sorry Shoe it gave me the impression you smelled of anchovies.
The cheap kind in generic vegetable oil, not olive oil.
Quote: Nil Putters @ August 21 2012, 4:27 PM BSTYeah, it fell a bit flat for me too Shoey, sorry.
No worries Nil, just wish I'd given Yacob a better script to work with now! Doh!
Quote: sootyj @ August 21 2012, 4:30 PM BSTAnd sorry Shoe it gave me the impression you smelled of anchovies.
The cheap kind in generic vegetable oil, not olive oil.
Wh... No, I smell more like Blue Stratos and Gravy.
Loved the animation, very impressive. Like the others said, it lacked something in the actual sketch, don't know what exactly, which is not very helpful to you I know. But the bits I liked were 'the olive', the ridiculousness of that on top of the huge sandwich was funny. Also funny was the looking up of the heimlich maneuver and then choosing to kick him in the goolies instead 
I've seen some of your other stuff and am a fan so though this was not as funny as a whole, I'd still give it a few stars 
I've got to agree with the others. Sorry S.P.
I do think Yacob's voice works too well with his own animations, so I couldn't disassociate it with them.
I hate to give animation negative feedback because I know how painstaking it can be to produce them.
On a positive note, it's good to see you return to 2D and Anime Studio Pro (I'm guessing).
Ah thanks for taking a look anyway. And cheers for the comments on the 2D animation itself. I'm pleased at least with the improvement there.
I have an Indiana Jones live-action film coming out in 2 weeks so hopefully I'll get back on track with that one.