He's a 12 inch pianist, a punch line to a joke about deaf genies and big willies
Sketch about a joke writer. Page 2
Ah! I didn't get that either. You should lose that. Or keep it in for the tiny percentage of people who will love it. Actually, take it out.
Quote: sootyj @ August 16 2012, 9:43 PM BSTHe's a 12 inch pianist, a punch line to a joke about deaf genies and big willies
Ah, like Badge says, lose it.
I don't know if I want to live in a world where people don't get a joke about a 12 inch pianist.
I'd have him finishing saying that he's recovered now.
And then tbere are two knocks at the door.
an intriguing ending....
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ August 16 2012, 9:53 PM BSTI'd have him finishing saying that he's recovered now.
And then tbere are two knocks at the door.
Nice.
Is the twelve inch pianist in or out now? Surely someone knows?
Quote: Stylee TingTing @ August 16 2012, 9:56 PM BSTI didn't get it either, until I remembered you sacked my cook.
It wasn't performing.
Quote: Badge @ August 16 2012, 9:55 PM BSTNice.
Is the twelve inch pianist in or out now? Surely someone knows?
Agreed.
He should lose it, as most people haven't twigged the joke until told.
hmm I have an idea
Quote: sootyj @ August 16 2012, 10:00 PM BSThmm I have an idea
SLEEP ON IT!
Never tomorrow is another day and another battle.
I like the fiery Arthur, I think he could go on and on writing joking wrongs with his trusty machine gun 
Thanks for the feedback one and all.
Terrific idea, could be worked up into a longer sketch or made a runner.