If you fancy a silly break from the Olympics intensity - please check out The Real MacGuffins Olympics sketches on YouTube, e.g.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5somMFClSE8&feature=channel&list=UL
The YouTube channel is: www.youtube.com/TheRealMacGuffins
Hope you enjoy - we are aiming to release a new sketch every Wednesday and Friday until the end of the Olympics and Paralympics,
Thanks and Go Team GB!
Dan, Jim and Matt
Hi Dan, the thing is, you're giving away the joke in a) the title b) the beginning graphics/vo c) at the very start of the commentary. After the first hurdle I'd got the idea.
Why not open with the racers going from the gun, mention technique, but not the event until the medal board graphic? Also remove the first part of the title.
Quote: Dan March @ August 8 2012, 5:09 PM BSTThe YouTube channel is: www.youtube.com/TheRealMacGuffins
There's nothing to critique here, just two Oxbridge toffs messing about in the park. Write some jokes.
As finished work, this should really be in showcase. Like the idea of the Halitosis qualifiers
Quote: don rushmore @ August 10 2012, 2:03 AM BSTThere's nothing to critique here, just two Oxbridge toffs messing about in the park. Write some jokes.
Your so wrong!
There are three of them.