IMO A great idea. I laughed at the spam javelin.
Bad Rover! Page 2
Neat linking of two current stories. I did wonder though if the rude tweets should/could be about various stuff the robot sees on Mars rather than earth based stories.
..and it'd be great if Frankie Boyle could be slagged off somehow..
Perhaps if the phone rang and one of the scientists said something like:
'Shit, it's the Met...'
An interesting and neater version of my punch
Neater, but I don't think either punch will get any laughs. You move from funny stuff to a satirical sledgehammer, and that's what doesn't work. For me.
And I'm right. 
I am going too disagree with Badge but in a supportive and collegiate sort of way and not because he is a know nothing knob.
I don't think, as it stands, you have a sketch here without the punchline. Maybe the set up could be less clunky though.
You're all wrong.
*storms off in a huff*
*comes back to say good luck with the sketch*
I really liked both the ideas but was hoping for a punch that continued the space theme, especially as you had Daley... Ennis... then no third hit. Twist is an excellent twist but I'd rather see two separate sketches, so I get my money's worth
Quote: AJGO @ August 6 2012, 11:41 PM BSTI'd rather see two separate sketches
You're not all wrong.
There is no right or wrong, just different creative approaches. Some of them proposed by idiots.
EDIT: Whose contribution is valued.
to all the new critique loveliness.
Quote: AJGO @ August 6 2012, 11:41 PM BST.. Daley... Ennis... then no third hit.
Boyle..
This new Critclique is rather
Quote: Stylee TingTing @ August 7 2012, 12:01 AM BSTBoyle
This new Critclique is rather
That was a very good idea Stylee. Are me and you the Critclique since we both suggested similar? Can we have matching hats? It'll be very
Eh? There's no way that I'm