Hello people,
Please check out our new comedy pilot:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D6yHOh72rRw
We would welcome any constructive feedback - thank you
Gene-ology Pilot
I'm going to say what I kinda say about a lot of your stuff.
Your technical skills are really great. You're filming outdoors; but the sound is still great and it looks good. You guys might not be Hollywood stars, but your acting is clear well timed and no line fluffing. With strong if crude characterisation.
But your scripts are infuriatingly linear and unambitious.
And don't really have any great gags built in.
Might I suggest looking at some of the better written stuff in showcase?