Is it too late for me to fix the title...? 
Disproving Dad Sketch Page 2
Or rewrite sketch so it's about paternity?
Quote: sootyj @ July 28 2012, 10:04 AM BSTOr rewrite sketch so it's about paternity?
I don't think there's any need to adapt it to paternity related issues. The crux of the sketch is quite clear and what I wanted to explore. A paternity sketch would be something new, not a rewrite.
It's a pun on disaproving which was your intent and disproving which is what you actually wrote.
Oh.
I don't know why but I am abnormally attracted to sketches that end with someone crying.
Remind you of your dates?