Comedy Spots entry

Friday 27th July 2012 9:55am

10 posts

Hi guys this is my comedy spots entry please view, and if you like please vote for me.

Much love

Jon Corr

Friday 27th July 2012 10:17am [Edited]

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wels its nicely done but is the joke just you pretending to do a perfume add?

becausethat's kkinda slight and it could do with a punchline