World Chess Championship (1st round)
WORLD CHAMPION MOHAMMED SMITH AND ROOKIE NEW ZEALANDER DAVE VOOLAKI WALK TO THEIR TABLE TO PLAY THEIR FIRST ROUND MATCH
MOHAMMED: (hand extended) good luck mate
DAVE: (right in Mohammed's face starts performing the HAKA)
KA MATE! KA MATE!
KA ORA, KA ORA!
TENEI TE TANGATA PU'RU-HURU
MOHAMMED CRAPS HIMSELF AND FALLS BACK OVER HIS CHAIR KICKING THE TABLE AND CHESS PEICES EVERYWHERE
MOHAMMED: (running toward the exit and banging into other tables and players)
HELP ME!..............HE'S GUNA KILL ME
this is just a quick sketch and would really appreciate a bit of feed back.
is it funny enough? could it be better written? could I do anything that would improve the main part of the sketch?
A new Zealander performing the HAKA at a chess match, now that would be fun to watch.
cheers guys