Hello,
I've written a couple of songs which I've so far only really received feedback on from friends. Been recently thinking about writing more, with a view to performing at some point, so would really appreciate any feedback on these two!
Both were filmed on an iPhone, with the first having particularly poor camera positioning, but it's more the content I'm after feedback on...
First one here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gZN2VCKhFW0
Second one here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LulkMo71J2A
Thanks,
Jono