Hi Guys,
Don't post a lot but a regular browser on these forums. Been a comedy fan forever and always fancied giving it a go. Be easy on me. 
Dirty childish lad humour!
Me giving stand up a crack! Finally
I thought you did well up there, you looked at ease. Material wise, it was ok, nothing that special stood out for me I'm afraid, but I did like the Michael Jackson joke and thought that was your strongest bit.
The poem at the end started funny but went a bit too crude and lost something by that I think.
Cheers, appreciate the feedback! Didn't feel as nervous as I thought I would up there. Doing my 2nd gig pretty soon and plan on toning it down a little bit.
Glad I did it though, very enjoyable
Great, good luck and keep us posted
For a frist time you were rather good.
Nice jokes well written, neat and linked into each other. You tell them nicely getting the tone and signalling the punchline.
Only thing is delivery is a little flat and maybe put a little bit of yourself in there.
But for a first timer good stuff.
Really impressive, good material just a tad more work on delivery, but really good.
Thanks guys!! Very kind, I will continue posting my progress