Hi all,
I am aware that it is a bit crap using my first post to be asking for some criticism, but if you should have 5 minutes to watch a clip and can give your thoughts on it I would be grateful indeed.
There are 2 acts on this clip. I'm the second one starting at around 4:00. Thanks in advance.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yb13gXxpEug
Mike Osborne
Liked this. The Aldi gag was good but there are quite a few good ones. Took a while to get going maybe. Can't give much constructive advice cos you're further along than me anyway.
I watched it and enjoyed it, but I think in some cases you took a while to get to the punchlines, and the payoff was more of a smile than a laugh. It was good though. Not really much to give in the way of criticism.
Thanks for the comments guys.