ClapTV

Hey everyone, I'm currently part of a team aiming to start making an online mockumentary series centering on the life of a rather delusional talent agent called Bruce Clap and his friend/personal security guard, Oscar. At the moment we have written the series but so far are still experimenting with how we want it to look. As such we have produced three short test footage clips. If anyone wants to have a look at these and give some feedback it would be greatly appreciated!

I'm assuming it's alright to post links to YouTube so here are said clips, in order.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFanUVjF4wg&feature=relmfu

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsp3En7p6X4&feature=relmfu

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lp8ho9ffT3s

What do you guys think?

OK Crap TV, boring. filled with disinterest after 1 minute, you have good face but NO content! sorry mate.

Quote: dellas @ May 4 2012, 5:41 AM BST

OK Crap TV, boring.

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No need for that.

I had no problem with the way this looked, if that's all you're looking for in terms of critique.

That's actually rather good, great sound and quite a clever joke really.

Hey this is ctitique, and smiley face? my opinion you may differ.

Quote: dellas @ May 4 2012, 11:17 AM BST

Hey this is ctitique, and smiley face? my opinion you may differ.

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What followed I don't have a problem with, but the "Crap TV" thing was hardly constructive criticism.

Sorry David was punning on 'Clap TV'.

Quote: dellas @ May 4 2012, 11:27 AM BST

Sorry David was punning on 'Clap TV'.

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Yeah, I got that. Now imagine if you'd taken the time to produce something and put it out there for feedback on an unfamiliar forum and the first thing you got back was some stranger making an insulting pun and grinning while they were at it.

An insulting pun?

Why I'd think they were being PUNctilious, expressing a PUNgent sentiment, all I'd done was taken a PUNt on my product and they'd PUNished me. PUNched me metaphorically and PUNned me down at a theoretical hi noon, I'd feel like a PUNk, and I wasn't even PUNdering for praise, I might even think them a PUNt

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Still liked it

OK guys, point WELL absorbed. I honestly never reply to critique, so will not profer opinion as it might offend.

I was just having PUN being PUNny, PUNdering to the masses.

OKthat's not really 'punny' anymore.

REPETITION!

You lose.

I win.

Sootyj always wins!

Firstly, thanks to whoever has watched the videos!

Secondly, thanks David for sticking up for me haha. I was prepared for some harsh criticism. I'm glad you like the look of the footage. What's your opinion on the content?

Quote: dellas @ May 4 2012, 5:41 AM BST

OK Crap TV, boring. filled with disinterest after 1 minute, you have good face but NO content! sorry mate.

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Okay thanks for your honesty (at least I have a good face haha), did you make it to the third video before you replied? Or did the first one just put you off entirely? Im aware that the first two aren't the most exciting, again it was a screen test really and the series won't have that many static clips in it. We've used these to give a brief intro to the main two characters.

Quote: sootyj @ May 4 2012, 11:12 AM BST

That's actually rather good, great sound and quite a clever joke really.

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Assuming you're talking about the footage and not the crapTV joke thanks very much! I've also enjoyed your pun puns haha.