Hello Sirs and Sirsettes.
Three drafts later and taking many of your criticisms on board, here is the finished pilot for our sketch show, Ripped...
http://rippedcomedy.tumblr.com/
Hope you enjoy and thanks for your help.
Ripped
Enjoyed this Dave. Laughed out loud at the Scarface one and Bacon Racing was inspired. Big chuckles at the De Niro biscuit problem too. Not so sure about the ending Ripped credit over the Grange Hill music, went on too long for me. Personally I'd have got out quicker than that. And I'd probably have ended on either Scarface or De Niro biscuits as they were the strongest sketches IMHO.
Good stuff though. I'd watch this on telly. (Although good luck with the clearance issues!) 
Quote: Lee Henman @ April 6 2012, 3:01 PM BSTEnjoyed this Dave. Laughed out loud at the Scarface one and Bacon Racing was inspired. Big chuckles at the De Niro biscuit problem too. Not so sure about the ending Ripped credit over the Grange Hill music, went on too long for me. Personally I'd have got out quicker than that. And I'd probably have ended on either Scarface or De Niro biscuits as they were the strongest sketches IMHO.
Good stuff though. I'd watch this on telly. (Although good luck with the clearance issues!)
Cheers, Lee. Funny, the De Niro's Biscuits and Scarface ones were two of the sketches that took the most criticism last round. I'm beginning to think this comedy game might be subject to a degree of subjectivism.
Quote: David Bussell @ April 6 2012, 8:29 PM BSTCheers, Lee. Funny, the De Niro's Biscuits and Scarface ones were two of the sketches that took the most criticism last round. I'm beginning to think this comedy game might be subject to a degree of subjectivism.
Or I could be totally wrong. 
Just remembered your 'Leave it to Roll-Oh' sketch and thought what a good fit it would be for this kind of show. Tried looking for it on YouTube but came up empty-handed. Where it at, Henman?
Quote: David Bussell @ April 7 2012, 3:09 PM BSTJust remembered your 'Leave it to Roll-Oh' sketch and thought what a good fit it would be for this kind show. Tried looking for it on YouTube but came up empty-handed. Where it at, Henman?
Here's the miserable Geordie lazy robot bastard. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NziCmFgk57M
There's Rainbowfellas as well which might fit http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6xP7Pq8KgA
Quote: David Bussell @ April 6 2012, 12:48 PM BSTHello Sirs and Sirsettes.
Three drafts later and taking many of your criticisms on board, here is the finished pilot for our sketch show, Ripped...
http://rippedcomedy.tumblr.com/
Hope you enjoy and thanks for your help.
Good stuff gentlemen.
Quote: Lee Henman @ April 7 2012, 4:55 PM BSTHere's the miserable Geordie lazy robot bastard. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NziCmFgk57M
Always loved that. 
Fantabulous
there was a bunch of other Geordie humour around it
but they were all shite
Quote: Lee Henman @ April 7 2012, 4:55 PM BSTHere's the miserable Geordie lazy robot bastard. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NziCmFgk57M
There's Rainbowfellas as well which might fit http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6xP7Pq8KgA
That's the stuff!
I really enjoyed that. The WKD ones are very satisfying, and Scarface was really well done. Good work!
Quote: sootyj @ April 7 2012, 5:11 PM BSTFantabulous
there was a bunch of other Geordie humour around it
but they were all shite
How man y'cheeky bastaad y'!
Nice work mate
Quote: MCharsley @ April 7 2012, 6:45 PM BSTI really enjoyed that. The WKD ones are very satisfying, and Scarface was really well done. Good work!
Tanks!
Quote: AJGO @ April 8 2012, 10:50 AM BSTNice work mate
Tinks!
Scarface and Goodfellas were the highlights for me. Those and 'bacon' which is so mental you can't but laugh
Thanks for watching, Otts. BACON!