Over the past two series I can safely say that I haven't been greatly impressed by Benidorm - Being fair to Derren Litten he's a fantastic writer and the first 3 series were fantastic, obviously the death of Geoffrey Hutchins left a huge hole in the show, anyway I have written a spec scrip for Benidorm - Here's the first 23 pages 
http://script1.yolasite.com/ if anyone wants to read, It might be absolute sh*te I don't know but I'm happy enough with it so far.
Well Mr Bucktrot that was far from being shite. The dialogue was spot on in most scenes but what seemed to be missing was an actual tied together plot. Some good stuff and I would read more.
Well Mr Bucktrot that was far from being shite. The dialogue was spot on in most scenes but what seemed to be missing was an actual tied together plot. Some good stuff and I would read more.
Quote: MrBucktrout @ March 9 2012, 4:03 PM GMTOver the past two series I can safely say that I haven't been greatly impressed by Benidorm - Being fair to Derren Litten he's a fantastic writer and the first 3 series were fantastic, obviously the death of Geoffrey Hutchins left a huge hole in the show, anyway I have written a spec scrip for Benidorm - Here's the first 23 pages
I'd have to say the first 2 series for me but hey ho!
Regarding this spec scipt, it seems to be an adaption of your holiday camp script (or vice versa) is this the case?
the scenes with gavin and kenneth are from my holiday camp script