British Comedy Guide

NJ: Cameron Adviser

I thought this was my strongest sketch this week, although on reflection it probably needed more jokes.

JUSTIN:
David Cameron's adviser is taking a break from Downing Street, and it's easy to understand why. The guy was appreciated about as much as everyone in Girls Aloud who wasn't Cheryl.

STEVE:
David, the word on the street is you're considering hiring Andy Coulsen. It's a bad move; the guy has more skeletons in his closet than a fancy dress shop on the run-up to Halloween.

DAVID:
Nonsense. The man is like Nick Clegg, he's all about the integrity.

STEVE:
There's also talk that you're considering appointing Emma Harrison as a 'back to work tsar'. Something's a bit off there; she's taking home eight million pounds a year.

DAVID:
There's nothing dodgy about that, that's the average wage.

STEVE:
Also, Rebekah Brooks is one of your constituents. You should try and avoid too much contact with her. She's got 'trouble' written all over her.

DAVID:
I'll take your advice on board, but Rupert has the final say on who my friends are.

STEVE:
Fair enough, but if you do decide to befriend her, and I'm sure you'll have the good sense not to...well this is a million to one shot, it's never going to happen, but as she's, how shall I put it, 'friendly' with the police force, if they were ever to give her a horse; whatever you do, and I can't stress this strongly enough, under any circumstances, do not ride that horse.

DAVID:
What am I, an idiot?

STEVE:
I'll answer that when I get back from my break. How long is the average holiday?

DAVID:
About a year isn't it?

STEVE:
See you then.

Had to read it twice to get who Steve was, but don't worry I'm a bit thick. It comes through that David is in his own world and I especially like the how long is the average holiday but Coulsen, Brooks and Mr Ed were probably done to death this week. It raised a titter though.

Cheers BW, I was hoping the Cameron being an idiot angle might play well. Alas, not.

This line:
DAVID:
I'll take your advice on board, but Rupert has the final say on who my friends are.
is ace :)

However, rest of the sketch feels a bit all over the place to me. Sort of just a list of people rather than one clear idea. And I think you need a stronger punchline.

Dan

Cheers Dan.

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