Hello There!
Any thoughts on this would be lovely: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fRyvNgi31T8 (thoughts on script, timing, look, voices, music, etc).
Thanks in advance
Yac
A Joke (Animation)
Had to watch twice to make sure I got it right.
Animation - excellent
Build up - excellent
Punch line - do you really want me to cuss and profane like a fish-porter?
Nicely put together as ever, you're getting pretty slick at this.
No technical suggestions at all.
But you've done the same joke better else where.
Cheers for the comments so far.
Shirley - In some way I'm complimented that the punchline makes you want to curse.
Sootyj - I've certainly gone the anti-humour route before. Guess this joke is similar. Not the same joke but I understand if it seems like I'm going over old ground.
Maybe fiddle with the form.
My favourite antijokes.
My dog has no nose
How does he smell?
ACHTUNG PANZER!!
What's black and white and red all over?
The punchline to this joke.
Suck don't they.
Technically speaking the actual penis itself isn't covered with hair so this didn't work for me....! I liked it, the animation is really good, would like to see more of his act and the audience reaction.
Quote: Shandonbelle @ February 2 2012, 9:17 AM GMTTechnically speaking the actual penis itself isn't covered with hair
Good point. Shall change "covered in hair" to "floppy".