Please have a look at my video, just a couple jokes iv working on that I thought I could run past an impartial audience before taking it out on stage, if you could take a minute to watch it and let me know your thoughts id really appreciate it 
http://m.youtube.com/?client=mv-google&rdm=4pcfq69zc#/watch?v=OIoN39lgoPQ
The link doesn't seem to be working for me Mathew.
Really? Sorry man try this one hopefully itl work, stupid smart phone lol
I like it, very good. One thing I didnt like was putting things in " ", first time was fine but after a few was starting to get annoying (just one of the many things that annoy me). The Suggs reference is great just didnt get the link to fish fingers.
Looks like it could build into a great set.
Good luck
Thankyou leigh I appreciate you takin the time to watch it and offer feedback, yeah I was wondering whether the suggs reference would land or not the fish finger thing is because he advertises. Fish fingers for birds eye lol n yeah I agree with the " thing, I think if I do it on stage with a mic I wouldnt be able to do it Anyway lol
Good luck for your gig tonight, let me know how it went down
Sorry found it rushed, and didn't get some references? More topical stuff if doing 'PC' issues , look in the news.
Keep going admire your style going for You Tube, good luck!
Yeh it was an entry for a competition, it had to be no more than 60 seconds long lol which references didnt you get? I have a feeling that some of my references may go over peoples heads a little so im very interested to know which ones, I think if I did this as part of a set itd be. Mich slower and probably better explained
The Suggs as a policeman was my favourite part, you could have maybe said he was reprimanded by his sergeant for wearing baggy trousers.
Nice! I like that
Just giving this a little bump...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?nomobile=1&v=OIoN39lgoPQ
nothing to see here, apart from the clip of course
Just bumping again
Bumping is not allowed on the BCG.
How I wish moderators actually did their jobs on here.
Sounds like they don't need to now that the BCG specials are out in force