CAMILLA THE THRILLER!
CAMILLA IS COLLECTING FOR CHARITY.
MAN: Here's a tenner, lady.
CAMILLA: No thank you. I have my own supply.
CAMILLA THE THRILLER!
CAMILLA IS COLLECTING FOR CHARITY.
MAN: Here's a tenner, lady.
CAMILLA: No thank you. I have my own supply.
I don't get the 02 bit..
Quote: AJGO @ January 30 2012, 11:19 AM GMTI don't get the 02 bit..
Number 2
There are some nice parts - the opening lines in particular - but there doesn't seem to be a central thread to the sketch, and the punchline doesn't really do it for me. I can see what you're aiming for, but it seems forced.
You're (both) right. It's sloppy.
*makes mental note to stop drinking neat gin late at night*
Thanks for looking - appreciated - I will now go and do the right thing.
Nice as it is Shirl (see you have edited it)
less is more!
Cheers Will