The Break Up Page 2

I think Timbo could be right about the radio sketch thought. It reads really well as radio and builds nicely - just maybe need to think of a different gag at the end.

I liked this. Quite original and an interesting take on the Medusa legend. Definitely works for me.

Great idea with lots of funny lines. I like the way they have their backs together. It all feels a bit first draft though.