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This is my entry for the current Circalit short film competition: Welcome Home

Do you want critiques from the forum fella?

Quote: Paulcuz @ December 10 2011, 6:41 PM GMT

Do you want critiques from the forum fella?

Well yes - I was hoping to get some feedback.

Bleaurgh!

Ok dude
In my head I saw the cast of Game-On (popular comedy sitcom of early 90s) but with a wierd as f**k ending that I couldn't reconcile as funny. Still, everything doesn't have to be amusing, and if it was ever screened it would probably have great shock value. As long as the colour was right.
I think menstrual blood in the media/telly/comedy etc is still one of the remaining taboos, so courageous of you to tackle it head on.

Good luck
Paul

The idea came from an anecdote I heard a few years ago, from a guy who had sex with a woman at a party. Apparently, she was on her period, and the room they were in (I think it was the bathroom) ended up looking as if Jack the Ripper had paid a visit afterwards.

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