This is a recording of one of our sketches performed at The Wilmington Arms last month, hope people enjoy.
Gangsters
This is excellent, very well written and performed, you two have considerable talent.
The pace is spot on, the confusion and word play is excellent, the only potential issue I see is that the ending isn't that strong when held up against the rest of the piece, but that's minor.
This would work well on Radio, having glanced at some of your other videos, they would too - explore that route, you've got enough showreel to attract an agent.
Brilliant! 
I don't know how you remembered all that either!
Liked it.. performance and writing..
"Blind Tommy doesn't like curtains.."
Good line.
Chaps? Just a teensy-weensy criticism of the sound recording.. could be improved imo..
But good stuff.
Very funny and clever. I loved it.
Thanks very much for the kind words guys, greatly appreciated. Sorry that the sound is a bit tinny, our recording equipment is fairly basic unfortunately.
As you say, the punchline could definitely be stronger - it's a bit of a groaner as is, but hopefully does the job until we come up with something stronger. Really appreciate the feedback.