Or Hi Res version it's infinitely clearer.
Lee and Nil your idea to put the family pic first is going to be in the new set 
Once I start the damn things! Sorry chaps I haven't ignored you.
This is the last (Unless Doctor Who inspires me) Comic for a little while.
First one of yours I'm not that much of a fan of. The ooh I'll have an affair in kinky outfit is too much of a character leap.
And the bullshitter pretending to be master chief is to much of leap.
Sexy nurse outfit though.
Isn't the 'bullshitter' meant to be her husband??
As ever the artwork is great, she does go a very deep red though, wonder what she's been seeing.?!
I didn't quite get the helmet the internet guy is wearing, or is that just to make him look like a weird? maybe the site could have been called 'nurses date soldiers'...to introduce the nurse thing, but uniform date is good , and I liked it as is for the most part.
Quote: sootyj @ September 10 2011, 1:25 PM BSTFirst one of yours I'm not that much of a fan of. The ooh I'll have an affair in kinky outfit is too much of a character leap.
And the bullshitter pretending to be master chief is to much of leap.
Sexy nurse outfit though.
Fair enough.
Quote: Matthew Stott @ September 10 2011, 1:30 PM BSTIsn't the 'bullshitter' meant to be her husband??
Yeh it is meant to be. Might need a line of dialogue in there to explain.
Quote: Shandonbelle @ September 10 2011, 1:35 PM BSTAs ever the artwork is great, she does go a very deep red though, wonder what she's been seeing.?!
I didn't quite get the helmet the internet guy is wearing, or is that just to make him look like a weird? maybe the site could have been called 'nurses date soldiers'...to introduce the nurse thing, but uniform date is good , and I liked it as is for the most part.
Mmm when deep it's meant to be a devil version, maybe I went overboard with the shadows. lol.
Ok so from feedback, it's not one of the best might need some work. Or just ejecting into space lol
Aah now that's clearer and funnier.
But there's no way I was going to guess it was him.
Need to give Sarah devil horns. And agree with the rest, the last frame ain't that clear. Looks smart though.
I like it - and I guessed it was Mike. Like the Pina Collada song.
As mentioned the artwork is good, but the colour change in the mother character is so dramatic I thought it was a different person.
I got it was the husband, because I noticed the hairy arms, but if I had not previous comics it would have gone totally over my head,
Maybe you need a separate panel showing the dad on the same web-site, but that would destroy the utopic feel of a dysfunctional family that care about each other but have difficulties expressing thjose emotions?
either way, I think the script needs more thought, sorry!
But shouldn't the viewer know it's going to be the husband anyway?
or not?
Depending on which, I think it could definitely be tweaked to get the point across a little better & get the laugh it deserves.
No you'll all bang on the money I think. Need some work I'm finishing off one at them moment once that it done I'll get back on this one. Because I think there is a good idea in there just needs some tweaking
Angiethat's a really interesting point about colour change making her look like different character I never considered may be I use a traditional shoulder devil instead. Good point there