Humm,
Well I was planning on inserting (or something) these pages into this post but I don't got a clue how to, if it's possible.
So here's a link to the sort of thing I do.
http://spleenal.blogspot.com/2011/09/plan-g.html
Like I said in my introduction, I draw comics.
But I seem to have made the intelligent decision not to include the stuff comics buyers like (moody super heroes)
You guys don't buy comics. So I'd value your thoughts.
Very Good Spleenal. I like 
Good work. The lines on the windows were a little headachey though, could you put some trees (if train) or colour in (if tube)?
If tube, the phone thing wouldn't work though- there was a brilliant story recently about some mobile company making a big fuss about its uber-cool launch of a new product in a tube station, then realising on the night that there was no reception
Do you think you used the visual aspect of a comic enough? It's extremely well drawn and stylistically I really liked it, but I found it a little strange to read a description of a scene and then have it shown to you.
Also, might just be me but the set up to this gag is bizarre without context.
Good stuff. Is it pen and ink or computer drawn?
Liked it!
Top notch witty characterful and lovely illustrations
Thanks for your comments everyone 
Oh and Corey it's hand drawn. (I actually drew it on the train to and from work!)
Nicely done.