Hello
Me having a go with writing, performing and editing an audio sketch: http://soundcloud.com/yacob83/internet-shopping-sketch . Any thoughts on it would be great.
Cheers in advance
Yac
Hello
Me having a go with writing, performing and editing an audio sketch: http://soundcloud.com/yacob83/internet-shopping-sketch . Any thoughts on it would be great.
Cheers in advance
Yac
Did you play both parts? If so good job. The idea is a good one, the pay-off is logical, obvious even which isn't a bad thing at all, you're taking the audience with you there. The jokes weren't laugh out loud if I'm honest, but as sketches go I liked it.
I've got a Soundcloud account myself and never thought of using it for sketches. Maybe I'll try this too. Cheers!
As for suggestions on gags, think about plays on words, puns, mis-heard or mis-read instructions. ie:
"I asked for some sachets of green tea, and you've brought me..."
"...some sausage and green beans"
"I also wanted some Irish Cream but you've brought me..."
"...Pile cream."
But I liked it, do some more.
It was good, Yac. Performed very well. As Marc says, it wasn't LOL. But it was funny enough.
Couldn't be arsed to do an animation?
Cheers guys.
Quote: M Paterson @ August 31 2011, 8:28 PM BSTDid you play both parts? If so good job.
Yep, both me.
Quote: Leevil @ September 1 2011, 1:41 PM BSTCouldn't be arsed to do an animation?
Totally.
Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ September 2 2011, 2:11 PM BSTCheers guys.
Yep, both me.
Cool. I think I might do one then. The more people who do their own audio on here the better. Maybe it'll spur the BCG to get it's act together re: the podcast.