Please look at the Hi Res version it's infinitely clearer.
Lee and nil your idea to put the family pic first is going to be in the new set 
So I have listened but can't be arsed to go back and repanel the old stuff 
COMIC: Being a Woman on Facebook
Quote: Gavin @ September 1 2011, 10:47 AM BSTLee and nil your idea to put the family pic first is going to be in the new set
Doesn't float my boat though mate, soz.
I liked this one Gav; I'd consider losing the last two panels to go out on the laugh though.
Quote: Gavin @ September 1 2011, 10:47 AM BSTLee and nil your idea to put the family pic first is going to be in the new set
Um, this is kinda nice but it's not great. Your drawings are way to good to be going with "slightly amusing". Which I feel like this one and the last was. These little laptop/internet gags would work better in a simpler cartoon. I can imagine stick men saying them in a crappy meme kindsa way.
I really think Newman's should be character driven.
"Oh that Mike is a grumpy old git" "Lance is mental" kinda thang.
I rather like nice and low key and a clever joke.
But for the final scene I'd have him friend her as him being nice not being guilted into it.
I like this one. I think her losing all the friends after putting the family details would work better if in the middle frame she adds a pic of the husband's grumpy face...then it goes to zero friends.
Quote: Nil Putters @ September 1 2011, 10:51 AM BST
Doesn't float my boat though mate, soz.
Fair enough mate
Quote: Gerry McDonnell @ September 1 2011, 11:16 AM BSTI liked this one Gav; I'd consider losing the last two panels to go out on the laugh though.
Thats a really good idea mate.
Quote: Leevil @ September 1 2011, 11:27 AM BST
Um, this is kinda nice but it's not great. Your drawings are way to good to be going with "slightly amusing". Which I feel like this one and the last was. These little laptop/internet gags would work better in a simpler cartoon. I can imagine stick men saying them in a crappy meme kindsa way.
I really think Newman's should be character driven.
"Oh that Mike is a grumpy old git" "Lance is mental" kinda thang.
Ok matethat's a fair comment. Imma drop you a dm not to clog thread.
Quote: sootyj @ September 1 2011, 11:27 AM BSTI rather like nice and low key and a clever joke.
But for the final scene I'd have him friend her as him being nice not being guilted into it.
Cheers mate, It's quite a sweet thing of him to do and would change the tone of comic alot. So yeh it could work. I'll give it a go once i'M home.
My computer is f'kin useless!
I keep being greeted with the following delightful message.
"Not Acceptable
An appropriate representation of the requested resource /FACEBOOK_COMIC.jpg could not be found on this server.
Additionally, a 404 Not Found error was encountered while trying to use an ErrorDocument to handle the request."
I'll try again later on.
Is that the same for all of them mate?
Right, the link worked.
The facebook one is prob my fave joke yet.
Couldn't decide if it worked better with or without that last panel.
'0 Friends' is a big laugh, but the '1 friends' is a snugly moment where Roseanne's studio audience would all go "Awwwwww"
Can't decide. Either way, it's drawn and timed brilliantly. The mum has that 'Lois Griffin' 'if she was a real person I would slam her' vibe about her.
Y'know I wouldn't be surprised if this one makes it's way halfway around the internet in forwarded e-mails, because it's spot on.
Quote: Jack Daniels @ September 1 2011, 1:18 PM BSTEither way, it's drawn and timed brilliantly. The mum has that 'Lois Griffin' 'if she was a real person I would slam her' vibe about her.
Agreed x2
Quote: Jack Daniels @ September 1 2011, 1:18 PM BSTY'know I wouldn't be surprised if this one makes it's way halfway around the internet in forwarded e-mails, because it's spot on.
That's a good point Gav. You should stick this on Lamebook or one of those sites.
Ta Gents
Quote: Leevil @ September 1 2011, 1:35 PM BSTThat's a good point Gav. You should stick this on Lamebook or one of those sites.
ooo not heard of that will check it out!
I liked it, I think it might be my favourite.
Preferred it in it's entirety though.
It was quite sweet.
It is a good cartoon. I also liked the attention to detail with her mouth to portray her emotions.