Hi Guys,
Can you please check out these comedy sketches and let me know what you think?
Thankyou x x x
The links are below
SKETCH 1: http://youtu.be/73ZPW8E2E_k
SKETCH 2: http://youtu.be/POAWMDCrttY
SKETCH 3: http://youtu.be/CCqz3RXB4mk
You may have to copy and paste them or click on them
Ok first of all this should be in critique, secondly the sound is almost unlistenable (same problem I have with my phone so have just bought a flipcam)
They're not really sketches, they're just you recording you having an argument with what I guess is your mum. Write some gags or structure, record them better and see how you go.
But I'd view this as more of a false start than a start.
Very much moved to Critique.
Actually I disagree, I thought they were hilarious. Is Dave a word?
Yeh MarcP but in fairness you are drunk.
If that's you acting alongside a recording, it's very good. If not, then why does that person talk through a megaphone? Either way, it's all very interesting and something to keep an eye on. That is if what you're doing is intentional. 
I did the Mums voice on a dictophone so it doesn't sound very good!!! Lol also makes timing quite difficult x x
Oh that's much more interesting.
In which case you're a pretty skilled performer.
Albeit with a lousy microphone and maybe some need to work on your material?
How about posting some written material in critique?
Thats a great idea, Thanks x x
Quote: Daisymaycooper @ August 14 2011, 12:33 PM BSTI did the Mums voice on a dictophone so it doesn't sound very good!!! Lol also makes timing quite difficult x x
It's very good. I wouldn't worry too much about the sound quality at the moment. It doesn't sound great but it still works. I suppose it's a form a ventriloquism, but one with more skill as you're having to think about the timing.
I also have another sketch,
would appreciate any feedback, The link is below.
Quote: Daisymaycooper @ August 14 2011, 11:07 AM BSTSKETCH 1: http://youtu.be/73ZPW8E2E_k
SKETCH 2: http://youtu.be/POAWMDCrttY
SKETCH 3: http://youtu.be/CCqz3RXB4mk
I enjoyed watching those; there are sound issues, but I liked them.
Thanks so much
That one is a bit more polished, it might be because it has more context. It's not necessarily better (or worse) than the others. It is good to hear you tried different things with it though.
Quote: Daisymaycooper @ August 14 2011, 1:26 PM BSTI also have another sketch,
would appreciate any feedback, The link is below.
It's all good Daisy May.
But are you going to coooper or not?