That is my intention, to teach people how to Laugh Your Fuc*ing Arse Off. Go on www.lyfao.blogspot.com and tell me if you do. But remember, a smile goes a long way even if you don't LYFAO.
Lyfao
Hello
Blogs a bit random, is it meant to be funny?
It is a pretty random blog and matter of fact is supposed to be funny. You thought otherwise? Why?
It's too random, it kind of skitters around. Even the loosest comedy needs a little bit of structure.
I'm pretty new to this so your feedback (elaborated) would be greatly appreciated. The main aim of the blog is to obviously make people laugh. I tend to speak about things that have taken place with me, or people that I know. Things that have gone wrong, so I understand the 'skittering' comment.
Hmm think of anything funny you write as being a constructed gag or collection of gags.
e.g. feeder line punchline I may offer more wisdom tomorrow
That would be...wise? Because all of what you just said makes no sense to me at all. Obviously I have alot to learn - again, appreciated.
just sort of seemed like some random kids blog about pretty boring stuff he does. It might be funnier If I knew the people, but I don't.. or do i? no.. no I don't.
Thanks for your feedback Badgers arse.
Hi LYFAO.
I just looked at your blog because I enjoy ''f**king laughing.''
On a scale of one to ten. 1 being Entertainment, 10 being Abrasive and bitter,
I'd give it a 5.
Thanks for your feedback, that means it's not shit and has room for improvement. Was it funny?
Define "Funny"
Only joking, I wouldn't try so hard to be sweary, a bit like when the teacher leaves the class and everyone starts messing about and swearing, not so much cos they want to but because they feel it's what eachother wants to hear.
Your heart's in the right place. The wedding pics are cool. Just relax, and aim your anger at more worthy recipients and we're good to go.
You should try writing a few bits of stand-up ideas if you want to be a comedian, You'll shed a bit of the facade and find out why you want to use humour to convey a message as oppose to poetry, painting etc...
And then you'll know what kind of comic you'll make.
Good luck x
A lot of people have mentioned the swearing and believe it or not, I'm trying to take it on board. Other than that, thankyou very much. Seriously.
Do you have any work that I could have a look at? It'd be interesting to see it.