In no particular order . . .
Caroline RIP: Nice Idea, a little too chatty but enjoyable YES.
Bi-Polar: Wasn't much of a climax, which was a real shame because the idea was interesting. NO
As Sick as a Parrot: Enjoyed the plot, but the characters didn't really stand out. NO
lo-fi: Just an extended conversation. NO
Living with Danger: Interesting premise, but didn't really go anywhere NO.
Lightening: Abit heavy on the directions, but good humour in places MAYBE.
Keith Lymingstone-Brown: The time-travel aspect could have been used better.NO
Highway to Hell: Dialogue was all over the place and wasn't particularly interesting. NO.
hardcow: There was hardly any story. NO.
God Complex: Didn't get to a point of interest quick enough. NO.
Four in a Gym: Similar problem as God Complex, takes too long to get going. NO.
Environmentaly (sic) Friendly: Slow but steady, enjoyed the surreal element. MAYBE.
Dead Healthy: A good idea bogged down in too much conversation NO.
Cometh the Padre: The writing style took away the good idea that was underneath. NO
THE OAP Bus: Doesn't go anywhere, story-wise. NO.
Superfood: Some funny moments, but the supermarket setting could have been used so much better. MAYBE.
Singing the Blues-It's a Blunderful Life: Starting with the long monologue made me lose interest very quickly, which is a shame as the idea could have worked. NO.
Shock Treatment: Was a fun read, but the escalation of the situation felt forced and mad psychiatrist is abit cliched. NO
Shit Happens: Really poor and offensive language did nothing but annoy. NO
And it's Life and Life Only: Spelling errors are a very bad start, basic mistakes let it down. NO.
Analysts: Interesting idea, the writer shows potential but it seemed rushed. MAYBE
An Ex-Rated Date: Errors aplenty. Basics need to be adhered to. NO.
Reasons to be Cheerful: Too many puns, not enough action. NO.
Privilege: The political aspect will always be a tough sell as it would take something special to seem fresh, which unfortunately this wasn't. NO
Urban Guerillas: Liked the idea but it dragged out too long to get to the funny.NO
University of Life: Not much story to speak of. NO.
Treading water: Slow movement made it hard to get into this, but some good ideas MAYBE.
There Must be Someone Else: Too much exposition and direction. NO
Theatre of Dreams: A few funny moments. The cliffhanger could be clearer. YES.
The Pinkie Device: The dialogue felt jarring, unnatural. NO.
The Oldham Chronicles: Really enjoyed the abstract element of it. YES
Outgoings-No 1 Christmas Hit: The premise is interesting, but it wasn't followed through in the story NO.
Old Man: The characters didn't appeal and story doesn't go anywhere NO.
Not On a School Night: Too much exposition so takes too long to get going. NO.
No Prospect: Too much Carry On humour for me. NO.
Middling- The Gate: Just a long chat. NO.
Mates Rates: Enjoyable, and one of the first submissions I believe, so took courage. MAYBE.
Checkpoint Dave: Had its moment, but didn't really flow. NO.
Apocalypse, John: Too slow and predictable.
Amateurs: The plot did not fulfil the promise of the idea. NO.
Agent of Chaos: Sloppy, but was a fun read. YES.
3 Bitches: Really didn't enjoy this, simplistic characters didn't work. NO.
Broken Records: There story wasn't fleshed out fully but I enjoyed the characters and some of the visual gags. YES.
