Bebopalula
Tuesday 7th June 2011 5:03pm
Wigan
12 posts
Quote: evan rubivellian @ June 7 2011, 5:52 PM BST
That's an excellent comment, phreaky--thanks!
I must check to see if the logline is supposed to be for the episode or for the entire series--I suspect it's the latter.
In the meantime I've come up with something more focussed on the central character. This comes in at 23 words:-
Shock Treatment - a sitcom
Forget comfy couches and talking cures--meet Dr Lime, psychologist and ex-criminal mastermind, for whom the best therapy usually involves a loaded gun.
I personally think is ten times a better sounding show... the first one sounding too strong a contrast between wacky (evil genius) and real (idealistic student) but the second one intrigues me and conjures up (to me) a similarity (positive) with the Buddy Rydell character in Anger Management -
- ps, again personal opinion, if refined again I'd be careful with the term 'ex-criminal' and maybe say 'unorthodox' or 'disgraced' or whatever, and whilst I love the idea of a loaded gun in therapy, programme makers tend to be overly sensitive to social climate issues, ie; gun, knive etc.
Good luck with the entry