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Funny in 15 Seconds entries Page 4
Hey guys, this is an entry me and my friends created, would love to know what you think!
Not bad, but maybe increase the build up and work on te delivery.
Quote: Andr007 @ May 3 2011, 3:19 AM BSTHey guys, this is an entry me and my friends created, would love to know what you think!
Nicely executed but pretty obvious as jokes go. Also, you're going to need to lop a second off for it to be a valid entry. And lose the music.
So Bussell did you watch my sex tape?
Quote: David Bussell @ May 3 2011, 8:07 AM BSTNicely executed but pretty obvious as jokes go. Also, you're going to need to lop a second off for it to be a valid entry. And lose the music.
But I love Bucks Fizz!
Quote: David Bussell @ May 3 2011, 8:07 AM BSTNicely executed but pretty obvious as jokes go. Also, you're going to need to lop a second off for it to be a valid entry. And lose the music.
Cheers for the feed back! Also, it is 15 seconds! if you watch the YouTube counter, it jumps from 14 to 16 seconds :/
Yeah, YouTube can be funny like that. I would recommend removing the music though - it explicitly says in their rules it's not allowed.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ih4hYhDoxlo
Lateral thinking...kind of.
Here is my attempt, a couple of mistakes, the cowboy has disappeared walking in from the right! The punch line is not the best but I wanted to leave it a couple of days before I committed to it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4CI0vwuIqR8
I made an alternative ending and a completely different one. Any comments gratefully received.
Anyone heard back yet?
Please have a look at one that I made
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bz6SmvRHWBI&feature=channel_video_title
Wondering whether I should edit the following and enter the last 15 seconds. Not exactly scripted but it amused my friends and family.
Have they actually put anyone's clips up on their site yet?
Here's my entry by the way:
Quote: earman2009 @ April 5 2011, 1:53 PM BSTMy first effort:
I don't think you need the 'is that it?' line. Better without.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZM-1eAI4T_o
Here's an entry from the South West. Hope we're flying the flag in the correct position....
The BBC picked it!!!!