Quote: KLRiley @ May 31 2011, 10:35 PM BSTIf you want complete accuracy, you need the teenager departing as its starts saying something like 'meh, not as good as it used to be'.
She orginally spent so long trying to make Matt Smith sexy actually got confused what the plot was and was like "This series it to complicated." Lol! To much content 
Didn't think much of the content here. Just not a very funny thing, although you're art style works well.
Quote: Lady Laughter @ June 2 2011, 12:13 PM BSTDidn't think much of the content here. Just not a very funny thing, although you're art style works well.
Fair enough. Thanks for looking 
Not bad but I think the teenager is more likely to be wandering why is dad making me watch this shit?
The tenant line kinda clangs. And the kid would perhaps be more thinking how shit it is compared to something else.
I'm not sure I agree about the Tennant line mate, its kind of her character, a bit of a geek fan girl. But. Feedback taken onboard, thanks for looking.
I liked it, works as is.
Quote: Gavin @ June 2 2011, 12:23 PM BSTI'm not sure I agree about the Tennant line mate, its kind of her character, a bit of a geek fan girl. But. Feedback taken onboard, thanks for looking.
Maybe, but then the geekiness is underplayed?
I liked it as it is! I think Matthew Stott should be knocking at the door however to address the issues!
I liked it too Gav. Think you're missing a question mark in the second frame though.
Quote: Matthew Stott @ June 2 2011, 12:26 PM BSTI liked it, works as is.
Ta mate.
Quote: sootyj @ June 2 2011, 12:32 PM BSTMaybe, but then the geekiness is underplayed?
I get what your saying. But I not sure it fits with the character most modern geek girls don't wear big glasses n stuff, and I want to appeal to a female audience as well as male.
Quote: Marc P @ June 2 2011, 12:46 PM BSTI liked it as it is! I think Matthew Stott should be knocking at the door however to address the issues!
HAHA!
Quote: Rob H @ June 2 2011, 1:56 PM BSTI liked it too Gav. Think you're missing a question mark in the second frame though.
I didn't notice that but I think your right
The line about the poorly maintained door killing Rory is truly priceless and needs to become an incidence of life imitating art immediately.
Quote: Godot Taxis @ June 2 2011, 2:09 PM BSTThe line about the poorly maintained door killing Rory is truly priceless and needs to become an incidence of life imitating art immediately.
Cheers mate
I haven't seen tonight's Who so I don't know about the door but I do like the strip very much.