Great idea and well executed. Might be a little dark when she starts chopping off fingers but overall very good.
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I really like it. Brilliant twist!
That's good, no trim required.
Haha, I could imagine Lee Evans playing the part of the Man ... The script seems like it would fit him perfectly!! 
What about his socks?
haha I liked it. Could kind of imagine this in "Jam" or "Big Train".
I'm no professional, but I do know what I do and don't find funny, and I could picture this, and it made me laugh. I think you could do something with music too - where the music is overdubbed, and the moment HE snaps out of the roleplay, is the moment he stops the music that might be on tape for example.
I liked it though personally.
Sounds good Renny thanks and thanks to everyone else too.