British Comedy Guide

The Rather Common House of Horror.

A COUPLE IN VICTORIAN TYPE DRESS ARE WALKING THROUGH A PARK AT NIGHT

Emily:
Are you sure it's wise to walk through this mysterious park at such a late hour Peregrine?

Peregrine:
Emily my Dearest, I hope you aren't afraid of creatures of the night (THEATRICAL LAUGH)

Emily:
I wouldn't normally be! But you would have to agree that this is a rather Common part of town.

Peregrine:
Which is why we shouldn't spend a second more than is necessary, come my darling let us take this dark, probably perilous shortcut through these trees.

SUDDENLY A CLOAKED FIGURE APPEARS FROM THE DARKNESS - EMILY SCREAMS
THE CLOAK COMES OPENS TO REVEAL A VERY SCRUFFY DIRTY BLACK SUIT.

Emily:
Oh my God what is that awful smell.. what is that thing!

Peregrine:
Get back Emily! It's a... (DRAMATIC MUSIC) .it's a Trampire!

Emily:
Dossferatu!

Trampire:
Have you got a pound for a cup of tea. My old friend mate.

Peregrine:
Don't give him anything he'll only spend it on blood

Trampire:
I did have a dog but I ate it

Emily:
I can't take my eyes away from his urine stained trousers

Peregrine:
Don't look directly into his hypnotic string belted lower garments. Quick if you ignore him he won't harm you. Just don't let him breathe on your neck

THEY HURRY AWAY

Emily:
I knew we shouldn't have come this way, you don't get homeless supernatural beings in Kensington

Peregrine:
Wait can you hear that Shh!

THERE IS A LOW GROWLY RUMBLING VOICE GETTING LOUDER

Emily:
What is it?

Peregrine:
I can't be sure but... oh my Heavens it's a full moon

THE VOICE CAN NOW BE HEARD TO BE MUMBLING & CURSING

Peregrine:
Cover your ears my dear It's a...(DRAMATIC MUSIC) .. it's a SwearWolf!

Emily:
But they're just a myth, a made up story

Swearwolf:
WaddyaFarkinmean made up you f**king silly bitch Awooooooooh I'll F**king shove that Silver spoon up your arsehole!

Peregrine:
He's bluffing my dear. Everyone knows that the Swearwolf cannot survive the touch of Silver... or indeed cutlery.. Quick let us make haste

AS THEY RUN A STREAM OF EXPLETIVES GETS QUIETER & QUIETER.
THEN THEY STOP TO CATCH THEIR BREATH

Emily:
Listen to me Peregrine! I am not averse to being mutilated or murdered by a monster with a bit of breeding but I am most certainly not going to succumb to a creature that lives on a council estate and smokes roll ups.

Peregrine:
Well then I think we should start running again

WE HEAR A GROAN AND SEE A FIGURE WRAPPED IN BANDAGES PUSHING A PRAM

Peregrine:
It's a... (DRAMATIC MUSIC) It's a Single Mummy!

Emily:
Oh well that's just going too far!
She's got Tattoos on her bandages for heavens' sake! Will this smelly peasant terror ever end

Peregrine:
Don't worry she seems to have another bundle on the way! She won't be able to move very fast

SUDDENLY THERE IS A LOW SINISTER VOICE FROM BEHIND

VOICE:
Perhaps it is time that you both came with me.

WE SEE A BONY FINGER BECKONING

EMILY:
Who are you, and have you never heard of the rule of three?

Peregrine:
That my dear, I do believe, is death it's very self.

Emily:
The Grim reaper?

Reaper:
How dare you Madame, I happen to be the Posh Reaper

Emily:
Oh thank heavens.

Peregrine:
Of course look at the angle of his nose socket

Emily:
And those robes, how elegant!

Reaper:
If you wouldn't mind just wiping your feet before entering the carriage.

Peregrine:
Now that is just the class of terror we've been brought up to appreciate

THEY CLIMB INTO THE CARRIAGE

Emily:
So Mr Reaper, what do you do for a living?

That's really excelent but the punch doesn't quite push the button

Very funny and really nice characters

Very good, loved the idea of the Trampire, Swearwolf and Single Mummy! well put together and funny :)

Quote: Steve Sunshine @ May 14 2011, 10:08 PM BST

Emily:
Dossferatu!

Brilliant!

I liked it very much, Steve. Not sure about the 'in joke' about the rule of three though. And I think you need to give Emily more of a role than just a feed to make it really shine.

Laughing out loud

Clever idea steve and very funny. :D

Trampire!!! Laughing out loud

Loved it Steve Laughing out loud

That is a great sketch Steve.

Thanks all.

:)

And good points about the rule of three line & the punchline.

Cheers for reading.

I thought this was a great sketch. I didnt mind the rule of three. The punch might have been a little stronger but overall I really liked it. I can't remember the last bad sketch I read from Sunshine. He is sickeningly prolific Angry ;)

Very nice. The out isn't quite right, but I do not think you necessarily need to go for a punch a such. Maybe something like, "So Mr. Reaper, do you know the Fotherington-Smythes? They were eviscerated quite horribly at Henley last month."

Thanks Timbo
I think that works great.
The pay off is the "Posh reaper" so to it just needs to get out quick while maintaining that mood. rather than another twist.

I hadn't really given the ending much thought, It was originally just about the Trampire, and I added the other two/three as I was a bit stuck with it.

Quote: Griff @ May 17 2011, 9:06 PM BST

Gotta love Dossferatu :D

Ditto this.

I'm just repeating stuff here but all it needs is a neater, swift ending. Rule of three gag has to go as well IMHO.

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