We try, we do try.
How can we get funnier without being total corn?
http://youtu.be/1nZTnLsnvKU?hd=1
Critic us all you want, in neg or pos lights galore!
How-to be great and still be a sitcom
Moved to Critique.
Well made, not at all funny.
I want my minute and a half back.
You need a plot and you need a punch line, at the risk of sounding rude that sketch didn't even add up.
Never the less you have the equipment and you clearly want to do something I think your best bet would be to collaborate with a writer.
I am sure there must be a hundred writers on this site alone that could benefit from having their work filmed, and would only be too happy to provide you with a good five minutes,
5 minutes? guys appreciate everything so far but we are talking about the web. People who watch content on the web generally need very short videos at leastthat's what bob odenkirk told us. I'm not asking if you think its funny or not if you can't see if its intentionally mocking the "corn" of a 1980s PSA then I guess I greatly over estimated the value content this site had to offer.
I didn't expect people to praise us, however I did expect some real feedback, thus not bluntly hating.