Feedback on Radio Show

Hi. New to this website and I've just posted my work in the showcase but I was after feedback from writers on the first episode of Unholy Behaviour, a series of comedy radio programmes that I have written, directed and co-produced. The project is self funded and I was lucky to attract a good standard of actors with theatre in Television, Film and Radio and information about the project can be found here: http://www.arrandutton.com/projects/unholybehaviour/podcast/

I'm still honing my craft as a writer, so any feedback would be useful, especially bad feedback because through Facebook/Twitter etc. I haven't been hearing any and I know it's too good to be true!

Thanks.

Arran

P.s. Twitter: @unholy_jesus

That should have been theatre, television, film and radio experience!

When I say "bad feedback" I mean, criticism of the programme. I'm having a mare!

Although it's well made, I could only listen for about 15 minutes because it just isn't funny.

If this was on the radio I would definitely turn it off.

Thanks for your honesty. I appreciate it. I'm glad you thought it was well made, though.

Kind regards.

Arran

It sounds very professional. Just needs jokes.

Also, anyone thinking of listening should be aware it has swearing, so careful where you are.