Just in Time

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Dr Inventor has created a super device that allows him to send objects through time! But due to a chrono-anomaly he must right the wrongs he's created and repair the time line using the only creature that has made a successful trip to the past.

Reveal a Narwal with a arm band.

Announcer
Now begins! Narwals In Time!

Ext: Hilters Germany

Hilter (next to 2003 VW Beetle)
Excellent with this future technology I can travel around more efficiently and use the money I would of spent on diesel to build my Nazi death bots. (claps hands excitedly, bouncing on his heels) And there's room for a little flower on the dash...

A time portal opens and a Narwal falls through horn first into the car. It explodes.

Hilter
Matilda!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

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Stay tuned for more Narwals in Time!

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Cheers to Nil for the edit

Love it.

Quote: Nil Putters @ April 16 2011, 1:15 PM BST

Love it.

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Sorry mate credit given!

It's pretty good but you can probably cut the exposition

maybe to

"Coming this fall what happenes when time travel meets narwhals?"

Narwhal lands on Hitler's car exploding

"Justice!"

From the people who brought you Squirrel patrol and Monkey Pimps, Narhwals in time!"

lol Good Idea mate. Think editing it again is a good idea Will look at it again once finish the others then edit them all. Cheers

Cool the main thing is it's a great sketch but the intro gives the punch away and explains more than it's neccesary.

Big Narwhal f**ks a car from nowhere and then we find out it's a rubbish new scifi show.

Is 2 very quick punches

Oh and thanks for reviving the moribund world of critique.

No worries

And I definitely didn't have to Google what moribund meant

You know I'm still looking for some one to animate that intermidable series of skits I did on a stingy time traveller...

Hmm one line idea for a skit

"Gary Glitter is a paedophile lost in time!"

Quote: sootyj @ April 16 2011, 1:36 PM BST

You know I'm still looking for some one to animate that intermidable series of skits I did on a stingy time traveller...

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Email them to me, Once I finish this run and get my backlog finish I'll give it a go.

Coolio

I may even write the Gary Glitter paedo time traveller one, I'm thinking of him trying to be the 4th wiseman at the nativity.

Quote: sootyj @ April 16 2011, 1:42 PM BST

Coolio

I may even write the Gary Glitter paedo time traveller one, I'm thinking of him trying to be the 4th wiseman at the nativity.

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Bit sick, but may I suggest sitting next to a young Mozart teaching him piano and him being wrapped around a young Tiger Woods, helping with his 'swing'?

Any way, back to Gav's sketch...

Is this part of something else Gav? Otherwise I don't see any joke: a whale fall through time and kills Hitler?

Reminded me a bit of the Derek and Clive sketch 'Save the whale' where Derek claims that the Nazis at the Nuremburg rallies were all whales.

Quote: Godot Taxis @ April 16 2011, 2:21 PM BST

Is this part of something else Gav? Otherwise I don't see any joke: a whale fall through time and kills Hitler?

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Doesn't kill Hilter it destroys his 2003 Beetle (thus cleaning the time stream). Just an idea not part of anything bigger.

There's far too much exposition in the opening line, so I think that needs rewording as Sootyj proffered.

As regards the content: A whale crushing Hitler's Beetle is a quirky idea, but a bit too random to be funny.