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New draft. Honest feedback please.
A lot of humour in this will come from the acting. The characters would be easy to play in a cringe worthy way but I don't think any humour would come through, it could be painful at points if acted poorly. However if acted well the script lends itself to some strong character driven comedy, I can almost imagine the cast of The Inbetweeners saying the lines.