Bush Baby is your name derived form your ability to conceal things?
I eventually found the script and I thought it was ok and funny in parts.
I think that because I am not used to following set out scripts that at first had a bit of trouble keeping up to speed.
Overall it showed that you posses a sense of humour and that you clearly enjoyed doing it, so in that respect you have to class it as a good thing.
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I can't find your second script Teddy either
Thanks for your comments
Quote: Marc P @ March 19 2011, 8:47 AM GMTWell done for posting BB, I enjoyed the read and liked the bounce of the dialogue, it put me in mind of Joe Orton for some reason. Maybe heighten the characters even more. Dogging is in the main a heterosexual hobby, I think Cruising is more the term for the gentlemen of Hampstead Heath by the by! You should write a play.
Dogging/Cruising? I've been misinformed
Thanks Marc for reading/commenting
I just added my script to the one up as I really only cut it in half to send it in, I was a bit of a cheat and it cost me
Quote: Teddy Paddalack @ March 19 2011, 12:48 PM GMTI just added my script to the one up as I really only cut it in half to send it in, I was a bit of a cheat and it cost me
Oh, ok,I'll have a read.
After reading several on here I can see why mine had no chance and I probably came in at number 1200 or thereabouts