Buster on the curates egg thing, that was an attempt at irony, you said some of the stuff I had written was dated which is fair enough, but to then use an 19th Century expression to highlight it, I thought was ironic.
Especially as the last time I heard that line was when Derek Nimmo told the Archdeacon that his gaiters were showing and the Lady Mayoress of Allbrightling on Sea nearly choked on one of little Fannys scones.
It was used as an expression of how I felt about your script: partly good, mostly not,(in my opinion.) The irony element, however it is taken, was accidental. Apart from the advice on structure, grammar and format, I wouldn't hold too much to the individual praise or even my negativity about this particular script. I say this not because I think I'm a better writer or have more experience in this field... I haven't! I'm an professional illustrator, who only started writing seriously this last year (and incidentally,whose grammar also needs improving) to be given the respect it may one day (with work and a little humility) be recognised.
